Describing the Distance

This is my rally entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 30 that won the Perfect Poet Award. ๐Ÿ™‚
Hope you like it. ^^

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The Image Award
from Thurday Poets Rally

Describing the Distance

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#1
Me and You

I could not reach you
Gravity keeps me down here
And you fly too high

#2
You and Her

Though oceans divide
And yes, your days are her nights
You’d still hold her tight

#3
Me and Her

I wonder what things
That make her perfect for you
To fly next to you

Fin.

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52 thoughts on “Describing the Distance

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  3. I love how you created a “poem” from the three haikus..very nice!!
    I like the first one the most…the gravity thing was very beautiful…sad but beautiful!!
    Happy Rallying ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. awwww.
    i honestly love this.
    sometimes u ought to wonder, i’ve loved him enough but why does he keep choosing the other?

    =(

    kudos!

    LuvLuv,
    B

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