Describing the Distance

This is my rally entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 30 that won the Perfect Poet Award. ๐Ÿ™‚
Hope you like it. ^^


The Image Award
from Thurday Poets Rally

Describing the Distance


Me and You

I could not reach you
Gravity keeps me down here
And you fly too high

You and Her

Though oceans divide
And yes, your days are her nights
You’d still hold her tight

Me and Her

I wonder what things
That make her perfect for you
To fly next to you




52 thoughts on “Describing the Distance

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  3. I love how you created a “poem” from the three haikus..very nice!!
    I like the first one the most…the gravity thing was very beautiful…sad but beautiful!!
    Happy Rallying ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. awwww.
    i honestly love this.
    sometimes u ought to wonder, i’ve loved him enough but why does he keep choosing the other?




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